What do you think about what I wrote?

ur work is seriously cool - realyy awesome, makes me kinda envious! ;) i love how ur not cliche at all and u twist the setting or plot so unexpectedly, u really hav the reader's attention arrested, (here's me writing this at 12:50 in the night!). i sympathise with the ghost. kind of really sad hw she nevr realised his confession but all the same it was epic. i especially love ur lat line, 'forgive me' just works perfectly. i recommend u publish ur work; enter a competition and c wat happens... :)